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Subject - Visit and meeting next month
Hi Craig,
Good news! I'll be in Melbourne in the first week of next month. Will you have time to meet and give me an update on your progress on our joint project? Could you please send me the latest data too? I'll be staying at a hotel near your office. If you’re free, do you want me to make a booking for lunch nearby? By the way, say hello to Kelly for me!
Best regards,
Justin
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分段和空行,留白處讓內容可以一目了然,創造喘息空間,清楚的架構,好懂易讀。
Subject - Visit and meeting next month
Hi Craig,
Good news! I'll be in Melbourne in the first week of next month.
Will you have time to meet and give me an update on your progress on our joint project? Could you please send me the latest data too?
I'll be staying at a hotel near your office. If you're free, do you want me to make a booking for lunch nearby?
By the way, say hello to Kelly for me!
Best regards,
Justin
本文摘錄自英語島 Engliah Island 2019年04月號
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